Ars Poetica
A poem should be palpable and mute
As a globed fruit
Dumb
As old medallions to the thumb
Silent as the sleeve-worn stone
Of casement ledges where
the moss has grown -
A poem should be wordless
As the flight of birds
A poem should be motionless in time
As the moon
climbs
Leaving, as the moon releases
Twig by twig the
night-entangled trees,
Leaving, as the moon behind the winter leaves,
Memory by
memory the mind -
A poem should be motionless in time
As the moon
climbs
A poem should be equal to:
Not true
For all the history of grief
An empty doorway and a
maple leaf
For love
The leaning grasses and two lights above the
sea -
A poem should not mean
But be
I posted part of this poem on another blog.
One of the many good things about blogging is the ease in which you can cut and paste - if I had to type out this poem to get it here I would probably not do it, preferring to type out my own words and thoughts.
The simplicity of the words MacLeish has chosen in juxtaposition with the profound emotions he evokes amazes me. I could go over this poem line by line, day by day and still not get over the impact of these oh so simple words.
I think my favorite lines are (a poem should be)
Dumb
As old medallions to the thumb
You can feel the smoothness of the medallion against the ridges of your own thumb. Your sense of touch is heightened as you seek the bas relief that once existed but now is only a faint impression.
This poem gets me two ways...in the sheer beauty of the words and because he is teaching you how to write a poem at the same time.
What is odd is that I have posted only two poems so far on this blog and both have been penned by lawyers!
6 Comments:
No way! Both of them were lawyers?! Huh! Then again, if lawyers could be satirists (Henry Fielding), then they could be just about anything else. I wonder if there are any artist lawyers or musician lawyers...
Lawyers can be just about anything...although off hand I can't think of an artist lawyer or musician lawyer. Maybe someone else knows of a famous lawyer/artist or musician?
One of my favorite parodies of MacLeish's Ars Poetica is:
A poem may boast bravado
Like a muted avocado
Shreik
Like old razor blades to the cheek
Respond like the moss-grown casements
Of flooded basements
But a poem to be audible
Must be inaudible
***
A poem should be hushed
As a bowl of mush
Leaving as the mush is swallowed
Mouthful by mouthful the spoon-entangled hollow
Leaving as the mush goes down
Memories of the lack of sound
A poem should be hushed
As a bowl of mush
***
A poem like a proper child
Should not be wild
Should clean its face
Should not mean all over the place
Should not be particularly present, should avoid
The regions of Cupid
Should be
A little bit stupid
-- Alan Ribback
I like your Blog Mary-Mu
Hats off to you!
Madam, thanks for posting the parody...it is sooooo good I'm putting it on the front page of my blog. Please come back again soon - you are a welcome visitor at any time.
You're a fine writer, Mary.
I am curious, what is your favorite rhetorical device? Do you use it (or wear it) often?
Madam Nichon said...
You're a fine writer, Mary.
I am curious, what is your favorite rhetorical device? Do you use it (or wear it) often?
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Madam, since I suffer from metanoia with periods of procatalepsis I usually am niggardly with my devices. But since you asked so nicely about my favorite I would have to say it was climax and I say that with a simile :)
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